Comments on: Solomon Ch. 9 http://www.andrewblatt.com/archives/39 Home to the Tale of Aldain and the Solomon Saga by Andrew Blatt Wed, 24 Feb 2010 17:22:16 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0.4 By: Baldi http://www.andrewblatt.com/archives/39/comment-page-1#comment-55 Baldi Mon, 19 Nov 2007 19:03:00 +0000 http://web.ics.purdue.edu/~ablatt/?p=39#comment-55 Oh, and don't forget to fix the "when."<br/><br/>"He and Vivian had met <b>when</b> about a year ago, not long after he'd met Jacob." Oh, and don’t forget to fix the “when.”

“He and Vivian had met when about a year ago, not long after he’d met Jacob.”

]]> By: Baldi http://www.andrewblatt.com/archives/39/comment-page-1#comment-54 Baldi Mon, 19 Nov 2007 18:59:00 +0000 http://web.ics.purdue.edu/~ablatt/?p=39#comment-54 Okay, so you already fixed the name problem, I assume.<br/><br/>Also, how do they go from being seated by the hostess to Silver chewing his pasta? It could easily help you get closer to the 2k/post mark. =/ Okay, so you already fixed the name problem, I assume.

Also, how do they go from being seated by the hostess to Silver chewing his pasta? It could easily help you get closer to the 2k/post mark. =/

]]> By: Eric http://www.andrewblatt.com/archives/39/comment-page-1#comment-53 Eric Mon, 19 Nov 2007 16:17:00 +0000 http://web.ics.purdue.edu/~ablatt/?p=39#comment-53 Way to put the chapter on notice. I'm sure it's shaking in its verisimilitude. Way to put the chapter on notice. I’m sure it’s shaking in its verisimilitude.

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