http://www.andrewblatt.com/archives/37 Home to the Tale of Aldain and the Solomon Saga by Andrew Blatt Wed, 24 Feb 2010 17:22:16 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0.4 http://www.andrewblatt.com/archives/37/comment-page-1#comment-49 Anonymous Thu, 15 Nov 2007 15:52:00 +0000 http://web.ics.purdue.edu/~ablatt/?p=37#comment-49 I love this chapter. It shows that these magicians have more than just abilities, they bring the unexpected to the table. good work. The only thing I would like to mention is that throughout the novel you bring in the issues that Solomon has with felicity's ability. In this chapter he tells her that if she proves herself this last time that he will have confidence in her. At the end of the chapter it ends with Aiden making a comment about Tim. I think that solomon should make a small gesture to felicity to let the reader know that she indeed did prove herself. I love this chapter. It shows that these magicians have more than just abilities, they bring the unexpected to the table. good work. The only thing I would like to mention is that throughout the novel you bring in the issues that Solomon has with felicity’s ability. In this chapter he tells her that if she proves herself this last time that he will have confidence in her. At the end of the chapter it ends with Aiden making a comment about Tim. I think that solomon should make a small gesture to felicity to let the reader know that she indeed did prove herself.

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