Comments on: Solomon Ch. 4 http://www.andrewblatt.com/archives/34 Home to the Tale of Aldain and the Solomon Saga by Andrew Blatt Wed, 24 Feb 2010 17:22:16 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0.4 By: The Drewcifer http://www.andrewblatt.com/archives/34/comment-page-1#comment-43 The Drewcifer Tue, 13 Nov 2007 02:47:00 +0000 http://web.ics.purdue.edu/~ablatt/?p=34#comment-43 The double ten-year-old is intentional. I'll fix the think-thick thing soon. The double ten-year-old is intentional. I’ll fix the think-thick thing soon.

]]> By: Anonymous http://www.andrewblatt.com/archives/34/comment-page-1#comment-42 Anonymous Tue, 13 Nov 2007 02:41:00 +0000 http://web.ics.purdue.edu/~ablatt/?p=34#comment-42 hey buddy toward the bottom you used a ten-year old girl twice in a row and i think she is supposed to be reading a book that is too thick for her not to think hey buddy toward the bottom you used a ten-year old girl twice in a row and i think she is supposed to be reading a book that is too thick for her not to think

]]> By: Ryan http://www.andrewblatt.com/archives/34/comment-page-1#comment-39 Ryan Tue, 13 Nov 2007 00:22:00 +0000 http://web.ics.purdue.edu/~ablatt/?p=34#comment-39 Every group needs a The Batman.<br/><br/>I liked <br/><br/>"For the record, I was against this from the beginning," Jacob grumbled as he grudgingly followed Silver to the door. Every group needs a The Batman.

I liked

“For the record, I was against this from the beginning,” Jacob grumbled as he grudgingly followed Silver to the door.

]]> By: The Drewcifer http://www.andrewblatt.com/archives/34/comment-page-1#comment-38 The Drewcifer Fri, 09 Nov 2007 14:31:00 +0000 http://web.ics.purdue.edu/~ablatt/?p=34#comment-38 I'll admit that I described Aidan's appearance more than once. I'm not sure where it will go in the proper finished version. Also, the prose and pacing in this chapter blows like ass. I’ll admit that I described Aidan’s appearance more than once. I’m not sure where it will go in the proper finished version. Also, the prose and pacing in this chapter blows like ass.

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