My goal for now is to update Aldain’s story MWF and to post a new chapter of Stephen’s story every Sunday. I’ve got quite a bit of Stephen written out in longhand. However, the beginning needs a considerable overhaul. The narrative perspective (hereafter called the “camera”) starts out much more distant, almost third person omniscient instead of the third person limited that the bulk of the tale is written in. After the first few paragraphs, the camera “zooms in” on Stephen and we get into the TPL POV that I’m going for. I’m thinking about reworking the opening of the book entirely. Anyway. I’ll post progress reports on how Stephen’s doing every Sunday until I actually feel comfortable enough to start posting chapters.

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